i really like this shot---great light and great smiles. The only thing I would change, would be to have the kid in the background not blocked quite as much by the other's head. But the image has a nice in-the-moment feeling that is priceless.
In the moment is right. Can't really go back and re-shoot something like this. I am a big fan of the candid moments. You get what you get with these shots and really can't do to much for changing. So for me, its priceless and precious. Well done.
laokai wrote:
i really like this shot---great light and great smiles. The only thing I would change, would be to have the kid in the background not blocked quite as much by the other's head. But the image has a nice in-the-moment feeling that is priceless.
Thanks for the suggestion Chris, but unfortunately I’m not going to have the opportunity to re-shoot. It was very difficult to get them on a perfect pose because I had my subjects jumping up and down on a trampoline and then every ten seconds they were asked to suddenly stop on their pre-assigned spots, so that I could try to capture the proper “action” composition. That process alone was extremely funny because as they quickly found out, it was impossible to stop and stay in place for more than a fraction of a second…
Steven Roberts wrote:
In the moment is right. Can't really go back and re-shoot something like this. I am a big fan of the candid moments. You get what you get with these shots and really can't do to much for changing. So for me, its priceless and precious. Well done.
Steve R
Hello Steven, you’re right, it’s very difficult to recreate a candid shot (it wouldn’t be candid the second time) But I don’t know if this one qualifies as a candid because it was all planned in advance down to the X’s marking their landing spots…
Thanks for the comments.
Excellent shot, John, my friend! A finalist for sure! I especially like the wide DOF. So often people shoot something like this and the foreground is completely out of focus. Nice work!
ComSoup wrote:
Awesome shot. Best I've seen of these entries so far. The angle and "candidness" make it work.
Thanks for the nice comments, CS.
I had the camera at very long angle and that allowed me to get a closer capture of their emotions…
Strad wrote:
Excellent shot, John, my friend! A finalist for sure! I especially like the wide DOF. So often people shoot something like this and the foreground is completely out of focus. Nice work!
Fond regards,
Endre
Thank you Endre! I always appreciate your thoughtful comments.
I’m glad you noticed the DOF; because even when there was plenty of light, I was forced to bring up the ISO to 500, just to be able to reach a good combination of a fast enough shutter speed to almost freeze the action, and an small enough aperture to keep all of them in focus.
I also used your favorite tool, the ‘fill flash’, set at a very low -3 power, with just enough light to soften the shadows and help modeling their faces a bit…