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Andrew Krend
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http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2288/2435271394_fe9debc804_o.jpg

Distortion by nature, lighting by Maglite, shutter by self-timer. All I did was make lemonade!

C&C welcome as always.

Andrew

Edited by Andrew Krend on Apr 22, 2008 at 02:40 PM GMT

Edited on Apr 22, 2008 at 05:40 PM



Apr 21, 2008 at 11:48 PM
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p.1 #2 · #291: Lemony Fresh


Nice idea Andrew, you image isn't showing up properly for me unless I right click on it and select view image, does your site perhaps disallow direct linking?

I like the lighting you've done on these, the tones might also be conducive to black and white, in my opinion.

Jason



Apr 22, 2008 at 05:02 PM
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p.1 #3 · #291: Lemony Fresh


Thanks Jason. I was noticing some weirdness with the image showing up. I can't find any issues with my site, but it's possible my hosting company has broken something for me.

I swapped the link around, hopefully it's better now.

The B&W idea is very cool. I'll give that a shot later in the week!

Andrew



Apr 22, 2008 at 05:43 PM
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p.1 #4 · #291: Lemony Fresh


Working now!


Apr 22, 2008 at 05:54 PM
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p.1 #5 · #291: Lemony Fresh


Hi Andrew,

It is easy to forget that with nature, distortions are fairly common. Nice execution and capture of this lemon. Good luck this week.

Steve S.



Apr 22, 2008 at 05:59 PM
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p.1 #6 · #291: Lemony Fresh


I love the lighting on this one. I feel like there might be a tad too much black space for my taste, but I do like the image a lot nonetheless. Good job and good luck.


Apr 22, 2008 at 09:34 PM
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p.1 #7 · #291: Lemony Fresh


I have to love the use of mag lites, I write that as a person who controls light with dish towels and aluminum foil.

This is a neat shot, I have to wonder though if it might benefit from a slight crop from the right and bottom. The negative space tips a bit for me on that side.

Those little halos around the lemons ground them in the space very well. This is very nicely done!



Apr 22, 2008 at 09:47 PM
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p.1 #8 · #291: Lemony Fresh


Ahh, yes, mag lites. I've used them many times for macros and low light shots. A nice take on the theme.

Good luck,
Chad



Apr 22, 2008 at 11:49 PM
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p.1 #9 · #291: Lemony Fresh


Thanks gt_me_jon, Tamara and Chad!

Negative space is a hard thing to nail. I was going for balanced-but-not-equal on each side, but I can also see it as too much. Later in the week I'll try a different crop and a B&W conversion (suggested above by Jason) and put them over on the critique board. I really like working with maglites for a dynamic moody effect. At some point I want to try something with chalk dust (or the like) in the air, so you can see a cone of light coming down (think ufo abduction scene).

Andrew



Apr 23, 2008 at 10:33 AM
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p.1 #10 · #291: Lemony Fresh


I tried out some of the suggestions I received last week:

https://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/640698/

Thanks!
Andrew



Apr 26, 2008 at 07:28 PM
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p.1 #11 · #291: Lemony Fresh


Like your idea, I think the one lemon is a little to bright in the center . Good luck this week.

Norm



Apr 26, 2008 at 07:59 PM





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