All thats missing in these images is the logos of the clients! Perhaps you could try a few different crops on the image of the blond in the pink outfit.
Looking at these shots again, I can't help thinking about how tight some of these crops are. perhaps its just how they are arranged with no spaces between them but something about it is slightly claustrophobic to me. any thoughts or comments on that?
Ryder Haske wrote:
Looking at these shots again, I can't help thinking about how tight some of these crops are. perhaps its just how they are arranged with no spaces between them but something about it is slightly claustrophobic to me. any thoughts or comments on that?
They are tight because it's the object that is interesting, not the dead air around. My opinion of course. Sorry to make you claustrophobic.
good stuff. I think it´s good that you included a ¨fashion catalog¨ type image with the girl with the purse looking to the right, but it´s definitely not as strong as the rest. (not from what you have done technically, but the model is overacting...it´s not very fashion).
It´s a pretty commercial book overall that would work well for getting ad jobs, or with more polished and ¨safer¨magazines, ie more vogue usa and less W magazine.
The leaned over blond wearing pink and a splash is really interesting. It´s cool that you see the clothes and hair and leave the rest to be imagined. Very nice work overall.
