Shot 1 - a little too much shadow/highlights around the subject. He's glowing ... he's not radioactive is he
Shot 2 has potential, but what's with the noise? Reduce it.
Shot 3 - this looks like a screenshot from a Japanese karate video game. Also, just to comment on the overall theme of your set, why is he holding a samurai sword in the middle of a farm? I don't follow the intended irony.
4, 7 and 9 are nice, but again, what's with the sword? Also, the smeared paint on clothes does not really vibe with the farmer's hat. Either he is a farmer, or a painter, but probably not both.
Shot 10 lacks excitement. It's also processed differently from the rest of the set, so I have trouble identifying with it.
Shot 11 is also nice. This time I actually can bring myself to appreciate the irony in your set (farmer's hat with slick leather jacket analogizes with rustic background and urban decayed parking lot).
You should have shot more of the eyes! They turned out well in Shot 1.
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