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Archive 2006 · #222: Basking in the sun

  
 
M.Markovich
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p.1 #1 · #222: Basking in the sun


Here´s my submission for this weeks WA.

http://homepage.mac.com/mmarkovich/pictures/min2.jpg

Edited by M.Markovich on Sep 26, 2006 at 09:40 PM GMT (Reason: straightened horizon and elimanted grid)



Sep 24, 2006 at 03:20 PM
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p.1 #2 · #222: Basking in the sun


Really nice shot Marco.


Sep 25, 2006 at 04:33 PM
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p.1 #3 · #222: Basking in the sun


Thanks Clayton.


Sep 26, 2006 at 02:29 AM
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p.1 #4 · #222: Basking in the sun


Really nice shot, Marco. I love the stark contrasting colors. Two tiny things that I think would make it more "minimalist. 1.) The horizon line (so to speak) isn't quite straight and 2.) I'd clone out that little square grating on the wall. Both minor things but i think they'd help.

All the best,

Endre



Sep 26, 2006 at 11:22 AM
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p.1 #5 · #222: Basking in the sun


Thanks Endre, I thought something was amiss and its was the horizon line. Actually caused by lens distortion that was badly corrected. The grid was bothering me as well. I went back to the original raw image and did the whole PS process from scratch. I think its better. Thanks.


Sep 26, 2006 at 02:43 PM
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p.1 #6 · #222: Basking in the sun


M.Markovich wrote:
Thanks Endre, I thought something was amiss and its was the horizon line. Actually caused by lens distortion that was badly corrected. The grid was bothering me as well. I went back to the original raw image and did the whole PS process from scratch. I think its better. Thanks.



Bravo! Tiny details make a vast improvement. I'm glad you found my suggestions helpful. It's really a wonderful shot now.

All the best,

Endre



Sep 26, 2006 at 03:11 PM
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p.1 #7 · #222: Basking in the sun


Thanks again Endre!


Sep 26, 2006 at 05:20 PM
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p.1 #8 · #222: Basking in the sun


The lines of this are so pleasing. I love how there are 3 simple colors, and the arms are extended to the red on the wall. The mood is great. All and all eally a nicely done


Sep 26, 2006 at 08:55 PM
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p.1 #9 · #222: Basking in the sun


Thanks so much for the kind words, Caley.


Sep 27, 2006 at 10:25 AM





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