One slight improvement: dodge the black margin on the camera-right side of the face and the gray blob next to the eye. The bright area on the right side of the frame does its job of pulling the viewer, but then the smudge.
GoodEgg wrote:
One slight improvement: dodge the black margin on the camera-right side of the face and the gray blob next to the eye. The bright area on the right side of the frame does its job of pulling the viewer, but then the smudge.
You're right, and good point. I see it now and will correct.
Sincere thanks.