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Met this young women at the library for this portrait. C&C always greatly appreciated. Derek




  ILCE-1    FE 50mm F1.2 GM lens    50mm    f/1.2    1/125s    125 ISO    -0.3 EV  




Dec 09, 2022 at 02:57 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Miles in B&W


I should read more.


Dec 09, 2022 at 04:13 PM
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Superb portrait, Derek. The soft light is very flattering and the expression seems natural and confident. I also like the hand position which helps to frame her face.
I have a library card but my wife has always been the one who goes to pick up books for us. That might have to change.
Cheers,
Brent



Dec 10, 2022 at 07:35 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Miles in B&W


My only nit would be the texture on the left edge of the frame. It is in focus / sharp and pulls me just a kiss toward it.

Would look to soften that fabric to reduce its pull with texture and in juxtaposition of contrast to the softness of her finger. focus is falling off from her outward, then we have sharper again as the fabric contour moves in/out of plane.



Dec 10, 2022 at 08:18 AM
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Excellent portrait, and I love the catch lights alternating positions.

Dneufarth wrote:
Met this young women at the library for this portrait. C&C always greatly appreciated. Derek





Dec 10, 2022 at 11:05 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Miles in B&W


Derek, You are an excellent photographer. in portrature(?). I am crap!
After looking at this initially on a laptop, I had some issues. On my 30" calibrated monitor....Wow!!!
She is beautiful and classy! A combo that can be debated for eternity!
Problem is I am 75..dare I display this in my "man cave"?

You members are of this caliber...DISPLAY then how best you can! They need to be seen!

Sometimes I think photography is too much like calling a football play.."Z right, Omaha V"...bla, bla bla....It works He caught the damn ball!!!...! Touchdown!
Dan



Dec 10, 2022 at 01:07 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Miles in B&W


Most excellent and captivating Derek.

Cheers Ray



Dec 10, 2022 at 01:51 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Miles in B&W


bnfotografie wrote:
Superb portrait, Derek. The soft light is very flattering and the expression seems natural and confident. I also like the hand position which helps to frame her face.
I have a library card but my wife has always been the one who goes to pick up books for us. That might have to change.
Cheers,
Brent


Thank you Brent.



Dec 10, 2022 at 02:24 PM
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RustyBug wrote:
My only nit would be the texture on the left edge of the frame. It is in focus / sharp and pulls me just a kiss toward it.

Would look to soften that fabric to reduce its pull with texture and in juxtaposition of contrast to the softness of her finger. focus is falling off from her outward, then we have sharper again as the fabric contour moves in/out of plane.


I actually have already tried to tone down that area, but perhaps some more is required. Thank you very much.



Dec 10, 2022 at 02:25 PM
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James Markus wrote:
Excellent portrait, and I love the catch lights alternating positions.



Thank you very much James.



Dec 10, 2022 at 02:27 PM
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Danpbphoto wrote:
Derek, You are an excellent photographer. in portrature(?). I am crap!
After looking at this initially on a laptop, I had some issues. On my 30" calibrated monitor....Wow!!!
She is beautiful and classy! A combo that can be debated for eternity!
Problem is I am 75..dare I display this in my "man cave"?

You members are of this caliber...DISPLAY then how best you can! They need to be seen!

Sometimes I think photography is too much like calling a football play.."Z right, Omaha V"...bla, bla bla....It works He caught the damn ball!!!...! Touchdown!
Dan


Thank you so very much Dan.



Dec 10, 2022 at 02:28 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Miles in B&W


Dougo wrote:
Most excellent and captivating Derek.

Cheers Ray


That means a lot to me Ray, thank you.



Dec 10, 2022 at 02:29 PM





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