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p.1 #1 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

Did a mini photoshoot with my wife and daughter, these are just a few of them. I'd be interested to hear your comments and critiques. Thanks

Edited on Oct 12, 2021 at 12:43 PM · View previous versions

Oct 11, 2021 at 02:40 PM

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p.1 #2 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

Ghost, these are great, beautiful family. Some fixable issues: skin tones are a little washed out; I'd warm the images. In the last image, I'd bring up the shadows on her face and legs.

Oct 11, 2021 at 05:28 PM

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p.1 #3 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

GoodEgg thanks for the critique always looking to improve

and I agree the skin tones are inconsistent.

Oct 11, 2021 at 05:57 PM

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p.1 #4 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

I agree with warming them up a bit. These are great shots but just a bit warmer would make them magnificent!

Joel

Oct 11, 2021 at 07:46 PM

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p.1 #5 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

Thank you I am working on warming up those images now really do appreciate the feedback

Oct 11, 2021 at 07:51 PM

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p.1 #6 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

So I went through and warmed them up here is a sample.

Oct 11, 2021 at 08:27 PM

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p.1 #7 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

Yes the last one looks much better! Fine work!
Dan

Oct 12, 2021 at 09:26 AM

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p.1 #8 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

Thanks I appreciate it

Oct 12, 2021 at 10:00 AM

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p.1 #9 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

Yes, the warmer version is better. #1 was the one that needed it most.

Oct 12, 2021 at 11:35 AM

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p.1 #10 · Wife And Daughter Photoshoot

Updated and uploaded with the warmer versions, Thanks

Oct 12, 2021 at 12:45 PM


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