Well while I am in the mood for posting photos, I took this one today. Just testing out a new (for me) technique of filtering the flash colour to get interesting results.
Not a portraitist, like Ed L, myself, I just feel that the highlight on the girl's chest is competing with her face (which I suppose is the subject...)
Otherwise I think you are on the right track.
(btw, I am commenting without knowing what you mean by filtering the flash colour)