Rick, this is a nice shot, but you haven't gotten any real feedback. I'm kinda new here so maybe I'm not supposed to say anything since you didn't ask for anything?
This has all the makings of a nice shot but I'll tell you the problem I'm having with it.
It resembles an environmental portrait but without a real environment.
I find the cabin is too sterile to make any kind of a connection to it. It's real enough and the grassy hills and mountains are beautiful enough but there's nothing there.
It's just too prop-like. Of course we don't necessarily shoot the same but if only a corner or half of the cabin was used it would disassociate from that feeling and seem more like the people were a part of it.
Anyway, just how it looks to me, it seems that everybody else is ok with it.
Nice shot
John