p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · a few shots of my first and thusfar only work with a mayhem model
Most of these were shot with an einstein 1600 30x40 soft box double diffused. I'd appreciate any and all comments, thanks for looking! I wish that she brought another outfit...
p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · a few shots of my first and thusfar only work with a mayhem model
Thanks for the responses thus far... I'll be honest, I'm not sure what a radial filter is? Is that a lens filter or a photoshop filter Great point about the bg in #1 which makes your pick of #3 natural.
shekarn64 wrote:
#1 - I would probably use a radial filter to get the attention the eye. The background is too bright for my taste and distracting
#2 - Really love the eyes and overall image except the blown highlight on the hair and back.
p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · a few shots of my first and thusfar only work with a mayhem model
Sorry I took the liberty to modify the image to demonstrate my point. There are many ways to do it but I created a new adjustment layer, reduced the exposure and created gradient mask.
p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · a few shots of my first and thusfar only work with a mayhem model
Some great comments and nice job of blending flash with ambient! I totally agree about the clothing. A more experienced model would have known to bring more appropriate attire, but on MM you get a wide range of talent. I've been where you were regarding clothing and as a result, I now carry a couple colored shawls or coverups as a precaution - greys, blues, blacks.
p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · a few shots of my first and thusfar only work with a mayhem model
Thanks again @shekarn64 and everyone has 100% creative license to put their touches on my images, it's a great way for me and hopefully others to learn.
Sorry about the image size, I'm resizing them here now...
Great point about the bg in #1 which makes your pick of #3 natural.
