Very nice. #3 critique is that the model's right leg is too far up front and out of focus. The one of her holding the coffee is great. And she's very attractive too, especially her eyes.
Sorry for not responding faster to some of the comments but I haven't been on here for a little! Thank you Danpbphoto, My1eye, gheller, dalate, Mubeen. And yes my1eye that image was featured on Instagram! The model had used the photo. I just started using instagram about 3 weeks ago so it's all still new to me, my account is gem-pixel. Happy shooting everyone!