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p.1 #1 · Outdoor portrait of my son


My wife wanted a portrait of our son for our Christmas card, so I took these this past weekend. Normally, I would never take a portrait in direct sunlight, but I think it works here. If you disagree, please let me know. Comments and critiques are welcome. Thanks.

X-T20 with 18-55mm, Flashpoint (Godox) TT685F fill flash.

DSCF2541-Exposure-Web by Scott Poupard


DSCF2543-Exposure-Web by Scott Poupard

This one is a crop from the 2nd shot:

DSCF2543-Web-Horizontal by Scott Poupard



Dec 05, 2017 at 09:20 AM
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p.1 #2 · Outdoor portrait of my son


I think I like the second one best. You did a great job with the fill flash, it looks very natural. You're right, direct sun rarely works, but it looks good here.

I would consider some adjustments so the skin tone of his right hand and his face are closer. I might lighten the face slightly and darken the hand slightly, but it would take playing around with the image to find out what would work best.

That's a handsome young man! I'll have to drive up to Forsyth to steal your location!



Dec 05, 2017 at 09:58 AM
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p.1 #3 · Outdoor portrait of my son


dmacmillan wrote:
I think I like the second one best. You did a great job with the fill flash, it looks very natural. You're right, direct sun rarely works, but it looks good here.

I would consider some adjustments so the skin tone of his right hand and his face are closer. I might lighten the face slightly and darken the hand slightly, but it would take playing around with the image to find out what would work best.

That's a handsome young man! I'll have to drive up to Forsyth to steal your location!


Thanks for the compliments and the thoughtful critique. I hadn't really noticed how light his hand is compared to his face, but you are absolutely right. I'll have to do a little work on that and see what I can come up with.

BTW, this building is at the Rumble Rd. - U.S. 41 intersection in Smarr. I'm sure you've driven past it a thousand times.



Dec 05, 2017 at 10:24 AM
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spoupard wrote:
BTW, this building is at the Rumble Rd. - U.S. 41 intersection in Smarr. I'm sure you've driven past it a thousand times.

I just did a lens test of the church there! Take Rumble road to Pea Ridge and you're in my neighborhood!

These are SOOC. The church was taken with a Canon FD 24mm f2.8




Smarr church






My back yard




Dec 05, 2017 at 12:31 PM





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