p.2 #7 · My Son's senior pics - with honor to his great grandfather
I like the theme and the light, not as much a fan of the photoshop effects (blur effect and some cloning which made a duplicate jacket in the grass on the right in the first?) and his hand in the first one is a bit awkward, probably spread out like that to keep the sleeves from falling too far down but detracts from the scene.
p.2 #9 · My Son's senior pics - with honor to his great grandfather
good job!
the only problem for me - it's looks too overprocessed
like a Ken from Barbie's world)
I think it will be more interesting in vintage style with some grain...
sorry, it's only my opinion. thanks for sharing!
p.2 #10 · My Son's senior pics - with honor to his great grandfather
Very good.
As others have mentioned, the DoP in post makes this look CGI/Toy-like. The sleeves of the jacket should have been folded under because they are obviously too large, as are the slacks (could have been pinned). I think there may be skin softening too, as the depth/detail of the face seems to have been lost just a bit.
That said, this is very good. But the bones of an absolutely fantastic image were on the set. You can improve it somewhat with more delicate/subtle post work - especially on the DoP and cloning - and in the future by paying particularly nit-picky attention to wardrobe.
