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jord217
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Hey guys,

I posted a similar shot from here a few months back when I was still on the road. I'm finally getting around to reprocessing everything since I only had an 11" macbook to work on. My wife and I only stayed at Monument Valley for one night but we had some great light. I can still feel the nice warm desert air on my skin. Much nicer than the single digit temps we're having right now ; )

Taken with 5dmkII and 24mm TS-E II



Edited on Jan 23, 2014 at 05:25 PM · View previous versions



Jan 23, 2014 at 05:24 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Last Light


Beautiful!


Jan 23, 2014 at 05:25 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Last Light


Hey Jordan,

You worked that rock into the foreground nicely. While I do like the composition, I will say the whole shot looks too red too me. At least with the rocks, I would pull back on the red channel.

Jim



Jan 23, 2014 at 05:34 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Last Light


Thanks guys, I'll have to check that Jim. I'm still having calibration issues (I need to invest in some calibration software). I'm still looking for a job so it has to wait


Jan 23, 2014 at 05:44 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Last Light


What a strong foreground! It's a compelling image, Jord. Might be interesting to see the same idea with the camera a bit higher to tame that rock and balance the FG and mittens.


Jan 23, 2014 at 06:05 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Last Light


That really is a strong foreground, so strong that I wonder what cropping off the bottom to a square format would do.


Jan 23, 2014 at 06:48 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Last Light


meee likeee


Jan 23, 2014 at 06:50 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Last Light


This works so well. Great idea using the foreground to lead the viewer's eyes.
Great tones and color. Congrats.
Fred



Jan 23, 2014 at 06:52 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Last Light


Thanks guys. As far as the crops go this is actually 1 frame out of a 3 frame vertorama so I've got a bunch of cropping options


Jan 23, 2014 at 06:56 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Last Light


I like this a lot, I might lose the bottom frame of your stitch as others have mentioned. Nice job of selecting that rock and if I have the placing right, it blocks the road which is a bonus.


Jan 23, 2014 at 08:10 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Last Light


Wow, great shot. Im looking forward to checking it out at home on my good monitor. Nice to see a different take on this icon.


Jan 24, 2014 at 08:37 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Last Light


Very nice!

I think that perhaps the camera should have been raised just a bit to make the entire middle butte visible (the bottom and a bit of sand seems cut off to me). Still, very nice



Jan 24, 2014 at 08:43 AM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Last Light


Thanks Ben and Justin ; ) Craig, if I remember right I know it took me quite some time lining this up to hide the road. I think to make the entire middle butte visible would have ended up showing the road crossing behind the foreground sandstone. I think I could have moved left or right to remedy that but then I would have lost the nice lead in of the rock. I really didn't pay too much mind to the cut off butte until you mentioned it. I'm sure it will bug me know


Jan 24, 2014 at 10:28 AM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Last Light


Stunning shot!


Jan 26, 2014 at 12:24 AM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Last Light


great warmth in this.
the comp is very aggressive but works
=)



Jan 26, 2014 at 07:55 AM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · Last Light


^ Thanks guys. I know the huge rock isn't for everyone but I like it. I almost just shot this from the viewpoint like everyone else but when the masses showed up I said why am I even here if I get the same thing as everyone else. Much more peaceful away from the crowds


Jan 26, 2014 at 01:28 PM
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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · Last Light


Beautiful composition and color. Great use of the 24mm TS-E II.
Exceptional work!!!!

Rich



Jan 26, 2014 at 04:42 PM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Last Light


Gooorgeous shot and beautiful light too.


Jan 27, 2014 at 01:41 PM
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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · Last Light


mabidally wrote:
Gooorgeous shot and beautiful light too.


rpope wrote:
Beautiful composition and color. Great use of the 24mm TS-E II.
Exceptional work!!!!

Rich


I appreciate it guys



Jan 27, 2014 at 06:02 PM
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p.1 #20 · p.1 #20 · Last Light


Beautiful. Love the color and the lines in the foreground drawing your eyes in.


Jan 27, 2014 at 09:04 PM
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