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A friend of mine who is a makeup artist has a cousin that is trying to get into modeling. I figured it would be a good practice opportunity for me since I hope to eventually get good enough at this to start charging at least a small fee to support my hobby. This was one of the shots from the session and I thought it happened to fit this weeks theme pretty well. Critique is always welcome so I can improve.

Thanks for looking,

Jon







Jan 08, 2012 at 09:29 PM
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Very nice shot. Like the angle of the swing.

Birdie



Jan 08, 2012 at 09:47 PM
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You did a very nice job with the lighting on this shot.


Jan 08, 2012 at 10:25 PM
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Lovely model and great pose, start charging.

Norm



Jan 08, 2012 at 10:45 PM
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Agreed with the lighting, probably as good as it gets.


Jan 09, 2012 at 11:03 AM
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I think we have a winner here, I love the composition.
I agree start charging, I'd be happy paying for shots like that



Jan 09, 2012 at 05:15 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · #483 On the swing


That's sassy! Love it.


Jan 09, 2012 at 05:17 PM
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Nice job on the lighting Very lovely model.

I agree start charging, I'd be happy paying for shots like that
+1



Jan 09, 2012 at 07:06 PM
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Very nice shot, and I agree with others, the lighting makes it.


Jan 09, 2012 at 10:30 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · #483 On the swing


Nice pose and nice shot!


Jan 09, 2012 at 10:51 PM
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Thanks Birdie. I like the angle of the swing as well, but I can't take credit for it. That was a happy accident

birdied wrote:
Very nice shot. Like the angle of the swing.

Birdie




Thank you Oregon Gal, Tom, and relms. There was about a 10 minute window where the lighting came together just pefectly.

Oregon Gal wrote:
You did a very nice job with the lighting on this shot.


Tom Harpstead wrote:
Nice job on the lighting Very lovely model.

I agree start charging, I'd be happy paying for shots like that
+1


relms wrote:
Very nice shot, and I agree with others, the lighting makes it.




Thanks for the confidence-inspiring note Norm. I think I've hesitated to charge people for what I do due to a lack of confidence.

Hightraxx wrote:
Lovely model and great pose, start charging.

Norm




Thanks for the kind words Navyblue.

Navyblue wrote:
Agreed with the lighting, probably as good as it gets.




Thanks datahar, but I think there are too many solid entries to be declaring winners so soon! I am glad to hear that you think that my work merits some sort of monetary compensation.

datahar wrote:
I think we have a winner here, I love the composition.
I agree start charging, I'd be happy paying for shots like that




Thanks Mark. It's funny you mention the word "sassy" because she is about as quiet and sweet as can be in person, but she can portray some alter egos in photos.

mark fadely wrote:
That's sassy! Love it.




Thanks happyfamily. Glad you liked it.

happyfamily wrote:
Nice pose and nice shot!




Jan 10, 2012 at 11:48 AM
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Nice one. Good balance between the foreground and the sky although I generally prefer the key a bit more down. Key light is in a great spot. The area to the left of the subject just behind her was bright for me I'm sure it's spill from your key. I like the tilted swing but something about her pose or her wardrobe makes her a bit over the top for this setting but I kinda like that element. Not a bad model and I think this matched the theme very well.


Jan 14, 2012 at 02:41 AM





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