Welcome!
Bautiful woman.
Great job with the expression, eye contact, sharpness.
I prefer the tighter crop. Only wish her hand wasnt in the image. It looks bizarrely detaiched, entering from somewhere else.
I think if you showed it to your non-photographer friends, all would be impressed and no one would comment. But, to improve, you need a slightly different pose.
One other area to improve. Seems like either more mascara and/or shadowing arond her right eye and you could cautiously lighteni this spot.
I like the way the light falls off on the left edge of the frame.
Welcome!
Bautiful woman.
Great job with the expression, eye contact, sharpness.
I prefer the tighter crop. Only with her hand wasnt in the image. It looks bizarrely detaiched, entering from somewhere else.
I think if you should it to your non-photographer friends, all would be impressed and no one would comment. But, to improve, you need a slightly different pose.
One other area to improve. Seems like either more mascara and/or shadowing arond her right eye and you could cautiously lighteni this spot.
I like the way the light falls off on the left edge of the frame.
Scott
Dec 06, 2008 at 12:31 PM
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