#1 - I\'d probably ditch this one. Really need to be up higher for that shot. Too much tape across her face (well, chin/neck). Horizon is off.
#2 - Nice shot. Quick improvement on it if you remove the green blob from her teammate from the left side.
#3 - A little soft and I\'d love to see the ball closer to her hand. It\'s my personal goal to get a good pancake shot and after shooting volleyball for years, still only have a few \"almost\" shots.
#4 - Delete. Same reasons as #1
#5 - Good, but lots of dead space in the photo. I think it would be a stronger shot with a _much_ tighter crop. Nit: horizon is off a tad.
#6 - Crop tighter
#7 - My favorite shot of the set if you crop much tighter and fix the horizon.
#8 - Needs a vertical crop. Good shot otherwise.
#9 - Crop tighter
#10 - I like this one. Shame the line judge is where she is though. I\'d probably tighten the crop, but that\'s just a \"too taste\" thing on this one.
#11 - ok
#12 - I like this one. Processing seems a little flat compared to the others.
#13 - Ok. If the player in the background was gone, I\'d like it more. The joys of shooting VB!
#14 - I tend to like this \"Matrix\" pose when they are hitting. Something very graceful about it. Just need to get the rest of the elements in the frame to cooperate.
#15 - Ok
Jay
Nov 07, 2012 at 06:54 PM
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