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Ianlacy
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This is my niece, Ellie - the newest addition to our family. She's really good at saying 'Cheeeeeeseeeeeeeeee!' Hope you enjoy!

Change 1/4: I removed the vignette to try and remedy the exposure on the shoes Thanks for the comments guys.

Edited on May 16, 2010 at 12:07 PM · View previous versions



May 15, 2010 at 01:22 PM
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She is an adorable kid but I find the "cropping" on the left and bottom a bit too aggressive. Also, and it may be just me, a shot of a single person is hard for me to connect to the concept of "family".

Happy shooting,
Yakim.




May 16, 2010 at 02:38 AM
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Cute pic. I totally get the sense of family and celebrating the idea of family from this photo. Especially because your subject is a toddler, and their entire world is centered around family at that age.

This photo seems natural, and impromptu. For me, that's the magic of it. However, the exposure on the shoes detract a bit from the rest of the scene. I know this would be difficult to capture again, on the fly.

Best,
John



May 16, 2010 at 10:47 AM
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Thanks for the comments

Yakim -- I hear you on the bottom left, but the shot was taken very quickly with my new 135 and I'm still 'learning' that focal length.

John -- I tried to reduce the vignetting (that I applied in post because it looked better on that day but now does not...) and think it helps a little bit. I still get where you're coming from however.

She's a doll and I'm only sad that I don't get to photograph her more often.



May 17, 2010 at 10:36 AM





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