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All comments are welcomed. Thanks, robert

I ate the tomato so replaced it with an apple. Thanks for the comments everyone. regards, robert

Edited on Feb 21, 2010 at 03:21 PM · View previous versions
Feb 19, 2010 at 06:41 AM
Chad Schulz
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Good idea. Needs some work. You've got color bleed (green) at the top and right of the image. Spots on the mirror are distracting. Maybe shot at a lower angle to add a little drama and provide some distance between the apples and tomato.

Take risks and try different approaches. Process the image to the fullest to get a clean and dramatic entry.

Good luck,
Chad
Feb 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yakim Peled
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May I suggest this pic as an inspiration? Chad said many things I agree with and I only wish to add a compositional one: The cherry/tomato in the middle looks "out of place". I'd suggest experimenting with different compositions of these fruits.

Welcome to FM and WA.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.


Feb 20, 2010 at 03:50 AM
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Chad and Yakim: thanks for the suggestions, I shall get busy on them. regards, robert
Feb 20, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Chad Schulz
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Better shot. The green fringe still bothers me, but the composition is better.

Chad
Feb 20, 2010 at 09:27 PM
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Hello Robert,

One of the first things that catches my eye is the amount of Noise in the cherry tomato. What is the black hole in the reflection of the left apple?

Welcome to FM and the WA.

Best Regards,
Kurt
Feb 21, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Chad Schulz
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · #385 Edible Curves


Now you've got it. Much better version, more drama and a clean image.

Chad
Feb 22, 2010 at 02:13 AM
robertjjones
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · #385 Edible Curves


Thanks for the help, Chad. I have got to train these old eyes to see the fine details. regards, robert
Feb 22, 2010 at 06:46 AM
kmease
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This one looks much better Robert, very nice.

Best Regards,
Kurt
Feb 22, 2010 at 10:03 AM
Steve Spencer
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Hi Robert,

I really like the lighting on this shot. Very nice first entry.

Best wishes,

Steve
Feb 22, 2010 at 08:28 PM
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Thanks Steve - the members had a lot of positive influence on this one. regards, robert
Feb 23, 2010 at 04:09 AM
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Looks really good. I like the slight angle of the row, and the blacked out BG with the use of the mirror. Nice effect.
Feb 23, 2010 at 07:39 AM
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Thanks, Mark. regards, robert
Feb 23, 2010 at 06:35 PM





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