I am by no means a pro and I am constantly learning...but the hard shadow on the left side of her nose and the blurr on her breast are distracting. The angle also causes her nose to look deformed.
thanks for sharing!
The hard shadow is fine, but it's a tad too long to loop lighting. I mean you didn't get it into her mouth, but she has a long distance from her nose to mouth. It might look better if you shortened the shadow there. Nice processing is you like the cooked look, which is neither good nor bad, just what you are going for. Try taking the shadow completely out and see how it looks. It's a solid photo.
Really like the first two critiques,both very good. The only thin gI will add from my POV is that the skin on the face seems a little too sharp. The pores seem too defined for me. I would soften them up a bit and then I think you really have a great pic here.
