Nice and colourful, but I agree with Yakim, either a wider POV, or maybe go more abstract and go for a tighter crop around the eye (with the eye offset from centre), and go abstract.
Hehe I'll try and do another shot or hundred with her and get more of her head - this one wasn't a crop, it was the full frame on a 100mm macro lens. I'll try playing around with cropping tight to the eye though tonight.
