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Archive 2009 · Girlfriend portrait cc

  
 
Mr.walczak1
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Nov 01, 2009 at 01:48 PM
Kaden K.
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She's cute. I would nevertheless use a PP function to lighten up the bottom
of the image where her chest is. Just too dark. I am not by any means easily
distracted by that area needs some retouching.



Nov 01, 2009 at 01:52 PM
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She is a lovely gal with a beautiful smile. I think the photo is nice but with the lighting, tone, and shooting angle and your camera height to her head you are creating way to much shadow and puffiness under her eyes and shadow around her cheeks and mouth. Suggestion would be to PP those out a bit and you will have a much better result.

Dave



Nov 01, 2009 at 01:56 PM
Mr.walczak1
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Thanks!, She has permanent ldark circles around her eyes I thinbk bewcause shes anemic? I havent figure out a good way too pp it out in her pictures .. I think its kind of adds her bit of quirkiness although I do unsertand in a model shoot it would be unnacceptable .. Thanks everyone for you input ..


Nov 01, 2009 at 02:01 PM
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p.1 #5 · Girlfriend portrait cc


It's a nice image, but I think it's over-processed.
It doesn't look real to me.
Also, maybe the focal length is a little bit too short for a portrait.



Nov 01, 2009 at 02:03 PM
Mr.walczak1
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p.1 #6 · Girlfriend portrait cc


LMAOOOO she would kill me if I showed her thatlolll ... too unnatural and she looks asuian in that piclol thanks for the suggestions though


Nov 01, 2009 at 05:24 PM





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