Archive 2009 · WA sharp

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p.1 #1 · WA sharp

Working on this setup
Now, I think it's way too cluttered
Also, the sharpened blade doesn't come to live

What do you think?

RT.

Jul 26, 2009 at 05:29 AM

sbeme

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p.1 #2 · WA sharp

RT.
I like this image. Well-exposed, nice detail, sense of tension. I think I know what you mean by too cluttered. I dont think the current crop brings enough attention to the blade. Try cropping from the right to leave a bit of skin on the upper arm, and maybe take a bit off the bottom to rebalance the composition.
Works well as a BW/sepia as well.
Scott

Jul 26, 2009 at 06:42 PM

Kaden K.
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p.1 #3 · WA sharp

Nice colors. I would like to have seen a close up.

Jul 27, 2009 at 12:36 AM

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p.1 #4 · WA sharp

Thanks Scott and Kaden,
Im going to do a reshot a bit closer, and I think with just one (short) arm in it.

Thanks for commenting!

RT.

Jul 27, 2009 at 01:37 AM


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