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Bill Sutherland
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Re-work

Edited on Jul 06, 2009 at 07:54 PM · View previous versions
Jul 06, 2009 at 04:23 AM
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Very nice pic. I really like the back lighting.

Is the leaf inside the ice or on it?

Happy shooting,
Yakim.




Jul 06, 2009 at 07:18 AM
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Nice shot, Bill. I like the color a lot! If I may be permitted a little critique: I find the curved edge of the ice at the top and the bubble in the middle to be a distraction from your subject - the leaf. I'm not sure why you set it up that way, but it would be easy to clone texture from the large areas to spread it up to those areas. You'd have to be careful not to let that be obvious but it shouldn't be too hard. Anyway, that's my two cents for whatever it is worth.

All the best,

Endre
Jul 06, 2009 at 12:05 PM
Bill Sutherland
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Yakim Peled wrote:
Very nice pic. I really like the back lighting.

Is the leaf inside the ice or on it?

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Thanks Yakim. The leaves are encased in ice.
Jul 06, 2009 at 07:55 PM
Bill Sutherland
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Strad wrote:
Nice shot, Bill. I like the color a lot! If I may be permitted a little critique: I find the curved edge of the ice at the top and the bubble in the middle to be a distraction from your subject - the leaf. I'm not sure why you set it up that way, but it would be easy to clone texture from the large areas to spread it up to those areas. You'd have to be careful not to let that be obvious but it shouldn't be too hard. Anyway, that's my two cents for whatever it is...Show more →

Thanks Endre. I had much the same misgivings so I've made some changes. I was probably a little ambitious with this project.
Jul 06, 2009 at 07:57 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · #352 Iced leaves


Artistic feel to it Bill!


Jul 06, 2009 at 10:14 PM
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MUCH BETTER! Bravo!

All the best,

Endre
Jul 07, 2009 at 01:43 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · #352 Iced leaves


Beautiful! Reminds me of a fossil in amber.
Jul 07, 2009 at 05:33 AM
Steve Spencer
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · #352 Iced leaves


Hi Bill,

I like the rework a lot. Very nice entry.
Jul 07, 2009 at 06:26 AM
Bill Sutherland
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You are all too kind.

Cheers


Jul 08, 2009 at 05:37 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · #352 Iced leaves


Cool, if you pardon the pun

Prefer it to the original, love the colour

Andy
Jul 08, 2009 at 06:25 AM





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