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Splendid!
Jun 16, 2009 at 11:50 PM
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Great idea for this weeks assignment. Excellent composition, colors, and bokeh. Well done
Jun 17, 2009 at 01:02 AM
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Dear Mr Flibble

All that practice having your arms tied behind your back in the straight jacket has obviously paid off!

However, i don't believe that Matron approves of this at all...cough cough...stalking young nurses in the asylum grounds was not part of your rehabilitation plan. This poor young girl looks way too nice to realize the dangers of the situation.


Jun 17, 2009 at 09:20 AM
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Artistically it is superb. I really like the whole concept, the colours and especially her pose. Technically? Well, almost. The little triangle on the left bugs me a bit. It looks like a neglected chilled, standing shamefully in the corner, hoping that no one will notice he feels so out of place. I'd also want a little more "breathing space" on the bouquet. IMHO one step back or a slightly shorter FL would have made it perfect.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.
Jun 17, 2009 at 02:48 PM
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