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Archive 2008 · Sunrise on the River

  
 
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p.1 #1 · Sunrise on the River


I froze making this picture. Winter is coming too soon in Wisconsin

http://nanandmont.com/fm/20081121-Sunrise_on_the_River-2.jpg



Nov 23, 2008 at 11:07 AM
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p.1 #2 · Sunrise on the River


My first thought: Man, that is somewhere I'm glad I ain't! Blessed with some unseasonably warm temps in my area right now.
Might want to re-crop. I can see where it's missed in the upper right corner. Just a sliver, but nevertheless...



Nov 23, 2008 at 10:05 PM
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p.1 #3 · Sunrise on the River


Interesting scene with nice detail in the foreground.
I wish there were more detail preserved along the distant shore.
Quite a bit of halo-ing around the water tower. Some of the lighter areas in the ice, rooftop look liike they have been expanded and taken a bit too far.
I'd like to see this one again, but with some change in the processing (which, thankfully, can and should be done inside )
Scott



Nov 24, 2008 at 03:53 AM
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p.1 #4 · Sunrise on the River


Thanks both of you for critical eye. I will re-crop and reprocess trying not to do so much "damage"

As usual, I tend to get carried away in the post precessing

Thanks again!
Monty




Nov 24, 2008 at 09:23 AM
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p.1 #5 · Sunrise on the River


Well, here is one that isn't so... modified. I'm not sure I like it better.

http://nanandmont.com/fm/sunrise_on_the_river_2.jpg



Nov 24, 2008 at 06:38 PM
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p.1 #6 · Sunrise on the River


Monty(?),
I think there is room in between the two images. I'd bump the contrast, bring out some shadow detail in the far shore, do a bit of dodging and burning, rotate the horizon down on the right. Happy to show you a quick re-work to illustrate, or email you.
Scott



Nov 24, 2008 at 08:00 PM
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p.1 #7 · Sunrise on the River


Scott,
Go for it! I would love to see what a person with experience can do!
Monty

Oh, here are the big files:
http://webexfiles.com/monty/sunrise/




Nov 24, 2008 at 09:02 PM
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p.1 #8 · Sunrise on the River


Scott,
DId I take that picture or is this one you took.
I am amazed so much detail was in the image. I would LOVE to see (and study) the modifications. You have really brought out so much in this picture.
Thanks
Monty
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Nov 24, 2008 at 10:03 PM
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p.1 #9 · Sunrise on the River


it was a long road, but well worth it; #3 is super.
regards, tom



Nov 24, 2008 at 10:52 PM
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p.1 #10 · Sunrise on the River


Monty,
Glad you enjoyed.
I will email you the workflow.
If anyone else is interested, PM me.
Scott

Tom,
Thanks. It is a great image that just needed to be optimized.
Scott



Nov 25, 2008 at 11:12 AM





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