The colors outside have a sort of pop art look, but not unattractive.
The fruit and the glass bowl are perfectly rendered.
Overall I like the image. Nice arrangement of fruit, too!
Photon wrote:
The colors outside have a sort of pop art look, but not unattractive.
The fruit and the glass bowl are perfectly rendered.
Overall I like the image. Nice arrangement of fruit, too!
Jim Schemel wrote:
The fruit might stand out more if the background was more out of focus.Thus a larger aperture if you can do it.The house roof is esp distracting
-Jim
Jim......I appreciate the comment. I will attempt your suggestion and narrow the depth of field if I get a good day tomorrow!!
Very interesting shot, Patty. It looks like you got that lovely bowl of fruit and stuck it on some astroturf with an Ortonized photo of a park behind it. I think it would be vastly more effective if you could get the very same lovely lighting on the the bowl with a much plainer background. Right now, the dolor of the fruit competes too much with the color of the background. I love how the light hits the facets of the crystal. That part is really great!
All best wishes,
Endre
Sep 08, 2008 at 02:22 AM
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I like the idea for the shot and the bowl of fruit a lot, but to me it looks like the bowl of fruit is just floating in the air. I agree with the others that trying to pick a simpler background for the shot would help a lot. Good luck this week.
I like the idea for the shot and the bowl of fruit a lot, but to me it looks like the bowl of fruit is just floating in the air. I agree with the others that trying to pick a simpler background for the shot would help a lot. Good luck this week.
Steve S.
Hi Steve......thanks for the comment! It looks like everyone agrees that my background is a bit busy.....
Hopefully, I can improve upon it before time is up
