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redal
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p.1 #1 · #309 Pearamid


Here's my first attempt at WA .

http://redal.smugmug.com/photos/366968333_dZUvz-XL.jpg


Cheers
Allan



Sep 06, 2008 at 05:50 PM
Ken Hernandez
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p.1 #2 · #309 Pearamid


Great idea, but I think the blue bottom really takes away from the image. Lighting looks good and colors are nice, but my eye keeps going to the blue cloth. Perhaps all black?
Ken



Sep 06, 2008 at 11:14 PM
Yakim Peled
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p.1 #3 · #309 Pearamid


The pear shots in this WA are simply amazing. I think I should have opted for a pear instead of an apple….

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Sep 07, 2008 at 01:11 AM
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p.1 #4 · #309 Pearamid


Nice play on words and nicely lit, maybe a more natural tabletop, a wooden chopping board etc may have been a little less intrusive. But hey thats what this is all about isnt it. i sure havent managed to produce the perfect shot yet !!!
Take care and good luck
Mark



Sep 07, 2008 at 08:40 AM
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p.1 #5 · #309 Pearamid


Hi Allan,

This shot has very nice lighting and is a very interesting idea. I like it a lot. Good luck this week,

Steve S.



Sep 07, 2008 at 11:24 AM
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p.1 #6 · #309 Pearamid


The shapes and colors of the pears are beautiful! Also like the pyramid arrangement.
However, I think the blue cloth below is distracting.
Nice shot!
~ Carrol



Sep 07, 2008 at 01:14 PM
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p.1 #7 · #309 Pearamid


Thanks everyone for the comments,

I'll have a look at re shooting it , or other ideas. At the moment i have 100 ton of pears to use as my subject



Sep 07, 2008 at 02:12 PM
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p.1 #8 · #309 Pearamid


I think the blue color is fine with the pears, but what might be needed is to have it extend a bit into the background, rather than cutting off suddenly. The way you have it set up, it does form an extension of the triangle, but with the nice soft curves of the fruit...
A good start.



Sep 07, 2008 at 11:24 PM
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p.1 #9 · #309 Pearamid


I love the title! Oh so clever!

Chelle



Sep 11, 2008 at 10:22 AM





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