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Carrol
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p.1 #1 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Okay... put the color one back up... with a little twist.
~ Carrol


Edited by Carrol on Sep 09, 2008 at 08:12 AM GMT

Edited on Sep 09, 2008 at 09:12 AM



Sep 05, 2008 at 05:01 PM
Ken Hernandez
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p.1 #2 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Great colors! I like it.
Good Luck,
Ken



Sep 05, 2008 at 07:24 PM
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p.1 #3 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Gorgeous textures! I'm not sure I'm crazy about all the horizontal lines, but I love the tilt of the central pear.


Sep 06, 2008 at 12:14 AM
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p.1 #4 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Good idea with the 3 different pears. Perhaps a closer crop could give more emphasis on the pears and less on the lines - just a thought



Sep 06, 2008 at 02:21 AM
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p.1 #5 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Excellent pic. The colours and the difference between the roundness of the pears and the two straight horizontal lines make the shot.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Sep 06, 2008 at 11:13 AM
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p.1 #6 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Hi Carrol,

I love the lighting and the choice of these different types of pears. Both are terrific. I'm not as big of a fan of the cabinet you choice. For me it draws my attention away from the pears. I agree with Jakob that a tighter crop would probably work better for me. Good luck this week,

Steve S.



Sep 07, 2008 at 11:46 AM
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p.1 #7 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Hi Carrol,

I like the colors of the pears and the lighting. Both are nice. I like the table they're sitting on, too. Gotta love photography...it is so subjective!

Chelle



Sep 08, 2008 at 01:48 PM
Yakim Peled
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p.1 #8 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Bring the colour back.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Sep 09, 2008 at 01:51 AM
Steve Spencer
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p.1 #9 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Hi Carrol,

I like this one a lot better. I like the contrast of the colors of the pears and the closer crop. I could take or leave the photo, but overall a very strong entry.

Best wishes,

Steve S.



Sep 09, 2008 at 09:45 AM
Carrol
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p.1 #10 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Thanks to everyone for giving your input - Much appreciated!
(sorry I don't have time to respond individually this week.) Good luck to everyone!
~ Carrol



Sep 09, 2008 at 10:24 AM
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p.1 #11 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Wonderful work, Carrol! I didn't much like the first one which is why I held off on commenting until I saw your final version. (I knew you were likely to change it. ) I liked the B & W one a lot but this one is much better. I think the biggest problem with the first one was the distracting line above the pears. you've done away with that in this version and now added the funny little touch of the photo alongside. A stroke of genius!! It takes away from the static placement of the pears without overpowering the geometry of the shot. Now this is a real contender.

All best wishes,

Endre



Sep 09, 2008 at 10:54 AM
Carrol
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p.1 #12 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Endre,
Thanks so much for your comments. I always appreciate your valuable input.
I learn a lot from you! - Thanks!
~ Carrol



Sep 09, 2008 at 11:02 AM
Beverly Guhl
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p.1 #13 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


BEAUTIFUL and wonderfully composed. Looks good enough to eat, too! Great work as always.


Sep 09, 2008 at 08:45 PM
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p.1 #14 · #309 - 3-in-a-Row


Aha, I hadn't seen the first change - I like this version much better than your original color entry. Enjoy the off center composition and losing some of the visual competition from above.



Sep 09, 2008 at 11:56 PM





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