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Kevin Sherman
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Haven't submitted here in a while :-/.

My parents left me to watch my sister. :-)

Here we go:


As always, C&C are welcome!

EDIT:: PS- how does one add the exif data to the end of the post? I have seen that 'round here of late.

Edited on Sep 04, 2008 at 08:25 PM



Sep 04, 2008 at 08:24 PM
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p.1 #2 · #309 Fruit!


Kevin,

Made me laugh. I like it. I have no idea about the exif data as I have been wondering that myself.



Sep 04, 2008 at 11:05 PM
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Hope you have good aiming skills Kevin The right side of her face appears to be a tad light/bright on my screen.

When you have uploaded an image there is a radial button option to post the exif data. It is then done automatically.

Edited on Sep 05, 2008 at 03:18 AM



Sep 05, 2008 at 03:17 AM
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p.1 #4 · #309 Fruit!


Hi Kevin,
Great shot, The look on your sisters face says it all she has every right to make a full complaint to mum and dad. Not that us parents ever listen anyway !!
As Bill says there is a button beside the image upload that adds the exif data automatically (providing it is present) one of Freds many improvements.
Take care and good luck
Mark



Sep 05, 2008 at 07:36 AM
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p.1 #5 · #309 Fruit!


Excellent. It really made me laugh...

A bit of extra sharpness would be welcomed though.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.




Sep 05, 2008 at 09:41 AM
Kevin Sherman
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p.1 #6 · #309 Fruit!


Thanks for the comments!

The reason he right side is brighter is because I only have the capability to set off one flash at a time, this one was on the right side (obviously)

Yakim, I might give that a shot. I had softened it as that is that I have heard you do for portraits. I like it more a little sharper too.

Thanks again!



Sep 05, 2008 at 10:17 AM
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I really like the shot but found the brightness, especially the flash reflection on the fruit, a little distracting.



Sep 05, 2008 at 12:02 PM
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p.1 #8 · #309 Fruit!


Hi Kevin,

I love the clarity of the shot and the expression in your sister's eyes. I don't really like the crop in the middle of her face, however. I would much prefer the shot if it showed her whole face. Good luck this week,

Steve S.



Sep 07, 2008 at 11:49 AM
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p.1 #9 · #309 Fruit!


Kevin Sherman wrote:
Yakim, I might give that a shot. I had softened it as that is that I have heard you do for portraits. I like it more a little sharper too.


I never do that.

Kevin Sherman wrote:
EDIT:: PS- how does one add the exif data to the end of the post? I have seen that 'round here of late.


There's a small checkbox near the 'Browse' button.

Happy shooting,
Yakim.



Sep 09, 2008 at 05:00 AM
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p.1 #10 · #309 Fruit!


I like the expression of the eyes!
Not sure I like the crop right thru her nose.
Good luck!
~ Carrol



Sep 09, 2008 at 09:30 AM
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p.1 #11 · #309 Fruit!


very interesting capture. like the tomato ^_^


Sep 10, 2008 at 01:59 AM





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