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I used one of these goblets for my very first weekly assignment a long time ago, and returning to this subject reminds me of how much I have learned by participating in these assignments. These goblets have been passed down in the family for over 100 years. I love all the colors in the reflections, but it is a challenging subject as it picks up reflections from everywhere. To try to control the reflections I shot this in a dark room with a very long exposure and the only light coming from an off camera flash bounced off the ceiling. Comments and critiques are much appreciated.

Edited to reflect suggested changes

Edited by Steve Spencer on Sep 01, 2008 at 07:05 PM GMT

Edited on Sep 01, 2008 at 07:05 PM
Sep 01, 2008 at 12:29 AM
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Hi Steve,

I like the different reflective colors on the goblet. That is really cool that it's been in your family for so long....Wow!

I have a few suggestions, but of course do what feels right for you. I think I would crop the shot in on the right side to match the left, and I'd show the entire goblet...

Chelle
Sep 01, 2008 at 02:31 PM
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Hey Steve, Love the shot! Good stuff!! I'm going to have to agree with Chelle, generally you want to offset the image for a more natural and artistic appearance as both Strad and I have done in our shots. However with a symmetrical piece I find it usually not necessary. Perhaps a little off the right side and a little more on the left would give it the right breathing room. You’ll know just how much feels right to you. I hope you don't mind the input. It really is a strong and well presented shot!

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Sep 01, 2008 at 03:17 PM
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I think I'd agree that this one suits a symmetrical presentation. If the stem has some interest, I'd go with Chelle and try showing the entire base. If that doesn't work for you, you might try cropping more from the bottom, so we only see the first "bulb" at the top of the stem.
Lovely job showing the colors and facets.
Sep 01, 2008 at 04:36 PM
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seechelle wrote:
Hi Steve,

I like the different reflective colors on the goblet. That is really cool that it's been in your family for so long....Wow!

I have a few suggestions, but of course do what feels right for you. I think I would crop the shot in on the right side to match the left, and I'd show the entire goblet...

Chelle

Hi Chelle,

Thanks for your kind comments and thoughtful advice. Your advice was very helpful.

Best wishes,

Steve S.
Sep 01, 2008 at 07:06 PM
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Vipermike wrote:
Hey Steve, Love the shot! Good stuff!! I'm going to have to agree with Chelle, generally you want to offset the image for a more natural and artistic appearance as both Strad and I have done in our shots. However with a symmetrical piece I find it usually not necessary. Perhaps a little off the right side and a little more on the left would give it the right breathing room. You’ll know just how much feels right to you. I hope you don't mind the input. It really is a strong and well presented shot!


Hi Mike,

Thanks for your nice comments. Your advise was very helpful.

Best wishes,

Steve
Sep 01, 2008 at 07:15 PM
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Photon wrote:
I think I'd agree that this one suits a symmetrical presentation. If the stem has some interest, I'd go with Chelle and try showing the entire base. If that doesn't work for you, you might try cropping more from the bottom, so we only see the first "bulb" at the top of the stem.
Lovely job showing the colors and facets.

Hi Jess,

Thanks for the advise on the crop. It was very helpful. I also appreciate the kind words about the image. Best wishes,

Steve S.
Sep 01, 2008 at 07:16 PM
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That looks really nice, Steve. I like this version a lot!

Chelle
Sep 01, 2008 at 08:01 PM
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Perfect!


Sep 01, 2008 at 10:23 PM
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Hi Chelle and Mike,

Thanks for looking again and for your very helpful advice.

Best wishes,

Steve S.
Sep 02, 2008 at 06:42 PM
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Nice colors, and I especially like the rim lighting on the bottom half!
~ Carrol
Sep 02, 2008 at 10:18 PM
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I like the tight crop on this shot. It emphasize the age of the glass. Love the inclusion of wine as well.

Great shot,
Chad
Sep 03, 2008 at 04:28 AM
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That is a beautiful goblet and a beautiful shot. Good luck!

BLR
Sep 03, 2008 at 10:54 AM





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