#1 has nice balance of lighting - background, her face and the pants etc. The only thing I notice is her left eye lacks a bit of light - a minor nit.
#2 No nits in this one. Nice job.
markperez wrote:
Second one is nice but I didn't like the pose in the first. Gives me the impression that she has a bad back.
I was trying to have her pose in a somewhat high fashion manner type manner, but it kinda does look like she has a bad back. Had a good chuckle over that
Nice effort with the strobes in the 1st. My complaint as others have already commented is the pose. Understand your goal, but looks so forced, uncomfortable and imo hasn't photographed well. A small nit--the horizon is off just a bit.
Like the compositon on the second much better. Good base exposure and strobe work
Nice effort with the strobes in the 1st. My complaint as others have already commented is the pose. Understand your goal, but looks so forced, uncomfortable and imo hasn't photographed well. A small nit--the horizon is off just a bit.
Like the compositon on the second much better. Good base exposure and strobe work
Gerry
Thanks for your comments. I think that pose could be pulled off by a model who understood it, but looking back she was uncomfortable with it.
I think they both look damn good, yes the pose in #1 could be different. Just remeber not to pose anyone like that anymore and you're set. Freakin' great lighting and color.
SKYWESTR wrote:
I think they both look damn good, yes the pose in #1 could be different. Just remeber not to pose anyone like that anymore and you're set. Freakin' great lighting and color.
