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Archive 2008 · Low key butterfly headshot

  
 
overrerad
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p.1 #1 · Low key butterfly headshot


http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u275/overmind_2000/my%20works/insect%202/IMG_0029.jpg

link to larger:
http://s170.photobucket.com/albums/u275/overmind_2000/my%20works/insect%202/1000/

Taken with Canon 400D, Sigma 150mm f2.8 macro, Sigma 1.4 teleconverter, speedlite 580M2 and softbox.
Shot taken in manual mode and handheld.
Taken at: f13, ISO 200, 1/160sec.

I have been doing a lot of macro work recently and this shot I feel is the current best that I have managed to achieve so far. To get this I had to follow the butterfly as it flew from post to post - with me moving over some rubble to get to him each time - where upon he would then promptly move to the next post!
In the end I was aiming for a simply side on head shot - the low key effect was not intended but is a great boon - though I did have to boost blacks, alter contrast and some curves a little to get the full effect, which is a little hazy in full size -- where I have considered selectively editing the dark area to increase the blacks there and remove the light haze.

I would be very interested in peoples thoughts and ideas as to how I can improve upon this with my macro work. - Thank you.

edit- smaller version uploaded


Edited by overrerad on Aug 18, 2008 at 12:54 AM GMT

Edited on Aug 17, 2008 at 07:54 PM



Aug 17, 2008 at 01:21 PM
Scott Stoness
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p.1 #2 · Low key butterfly headshot


I suggest posting smaller for better feedback.

I suggest cloning out bottom right bright object.

Nice view of bug. A bit dark for my liking.

Head is a bit centred - What about cropping right to just past leg and some off top to see if it improves.


Edited on Aug 17, 2008 at 04:30 PM



Aug 17, 2008 at 04:24 PM





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