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Mike Letour
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p.1 #1 · James River Bicycle Tour


This is my first picture post of any kind in a public forum. I have a thick skin, though, and I know how it works here. I am somewhat equipment-challenged right now, with only a 300D and the 18-55 kit lens (40D arriving Friday! Woohoo!). The light was fading, and I had to brace on the guard rail of a highway overpass. I had to crop more than I would have liked, but the image didn't degrade as much as I expected. My PP consisted of cloning out some distracting white bits and de-saturating the flora, which was also distracting. Is there anything to like about this shot? What should I have done differently? Thanks in advance (and sorry if the pic doesn't show; like I said, I've never posted before).



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Edited by Mike Letour on Jul 11, 2008 at 10:49 PM GMT

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Jul 01, 2008 at 07:51 PM
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p.1 #2 · James River Bicycle Tour


As an avid cyclist, I'm curious about the story behind this shot.
Image needs a bump up of contrast with an S curve in Photoshop or play in your editor of choice. Other than that, photo is fine, but it did take me a bit of time to locate the bike in such a large scene.
40D should be great, but the 300D served me well for a couple of years and the 18-55 is not bad.
You might want to post larger, for better feedback. Try 800 pixels on the long edge.
Scott G



Jul 01, 2008 at 09:01 PM
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p.1 #3 · James River Bicycle Tour


Thanks for the feedback. I felt the same way about the bike, but 1. I like the shapes of the big rocks, and 2. Any more cropping and it would have fallen to pieces.

I enlarged the pic.

Mike



Jul 01, 2008 at 09:22 PM
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p.1 #4 · James River Bicycle Tour


Good framing. Interesting. Do ctrl L and move triangles in to histogram is my suggestion to get better white balance.

A bit of noise reduction or depspeckling might help.



Jul 05, 2008 at 12:25 PM
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p.1 #5 · James River Bicycle Tour


It's an interesting perspective, especially when you can't see the entire photo at once.

More contrast would be nice, but that will be tough with the reflections on the surface of the water. The shadows of the rocks already look like they're about as dark as they should be, so increasing contrast might throw that off a bit.

Shooting with a polarizing filter to cut the reflections and allow some more detail from the bottom to come through might have helped.

Edited on Jul 06, 2008 at 01:19 PM



Jul 06, 2008 at 01:16 PM
Mike Letour
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p.1 #6 · James River Bicycle Tour


Thanks. I'm just realizing that I need to pay more attention to WB. I've been lazy with it so far.


Jul 07, 2008 at 05:46 AM
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p.1 #7 · James River Bicycle Tour


Thanks. I need to build a basic set of filters, including a polarizer. Other than just getting a new camera last week, I have a blank slate when it comes to equipment.


Jul 07, 2008 at 05:50 AM
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p.1 #8 · James River Bicycle Tour


sbeme wrote:
As an avid cyclist, I'm curious about the story behind this shot.
Image needs a bump up of contrast with an S curve in Photoshop or play in your editor of choice. Other than that, photo is fine, but it did take me a bit of time to locate the bike in such a large scene.
40D should be great, but the 300D served me well for a couple of years and the 18-55 is not bad.
You might want to post larger, for better feedback. Try 800 pixels on the long edge.
Scott G


I just got back to tweaking this. Your input about contrast was a great help.



Jul 11, 2008 at 10:51 PM





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