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sevan pulurian
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This is my very first entry, thought this fit the theme.



Comments welcome.

Sevan

Edited on Jun 04, 2008 at 01:06 AM
Jun 04, 2008 at 01:04 AM
Steve Spencer
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · #297 Deep Dance


Hi Sevan,

Welcome to the weekly assignment. A very interesting idea for the WA. Obviously a very meaningful event for the couple, but I wish I could see the man's eyes in the shot. I almost always find that I have a hard time appreciating an expression without the eyes. I do like the idea here very much, however. Good luck this week.

Steve S.
Jun 04, 2008 at 06:14 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · #297 Deep Dance


Thanks Steven any and all comment only improve my skills.
Jun 04, 2008 at 09:23 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · #297 Deep Dance


Welcome to the Forum Sevan!
1. Negative space is a good thing, but the large block of black on the right side of the photo doesn't add anything to this shot in my opinion. I would make this a closer crop.
2. His eyes are closed... looks more like he's falling asleep than in love.
Keep shooting and posting!
Regards,
Carrol
Jun 05, 2008 at 10:38 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · #297 Deep Dance


Hahahahaha very true.

Thanks

Sevan
Jun 05, 2008 at 02:08 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · #297 Deep Dance


Got to agree with Carrol, its more deep sleep than deep dance looking at his eyes or lack of them. Definitely a tighter crop, may not show dance but may have shown a deeper love.

Welcome and good luck.
Adam
Jun 05, 2008 at 04:53 PM





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