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Il Medico
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p.3 #1 · The Swimmer


liamh wrote:
Hi Gene,

I said earlier in this thread that I assumed because it is a shot of a boy swimming that it qualifies as a 'sports' shot. I now see and understand that is not the case, that's what I mean by learning how this forum works.

I also think that this misunderstanding is the cause of much of the comment on this thread as it is a staged water 'portrait' rather than a 'sports' shot. This is something I recognize now, but only because of peoples responses on this thread.

I thought I gave all the context required, "swims like he's drowning",
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Hi Liam,

I'm not an English major, nor do I know if english is your first language but...

You wrote- "swims like a man drowning"

Again that doesn't tell me that he IS swimming in the photo. It tells me HOW he swims.

Big difference.

Better would've been- "Here's a shot/photo/image etc... of my nephew swimming like a man drowning".

It would then tell the viewer all that you intended and implied, which is, WHO it is, WHAT they are doing and HOW they are doing it.

Then you could've described your setup for this shot which apparently was somewhat technical.

I have no doubt you're a much better photographer than I am, but no one but you knows what went into the photo and the circumstances surrounding it.

All any of us were asking or commenting was that we wanted or needed to know to make an informed critique.

Hopefull we'll see some more of your creativity here or in the people forum.

Gene

Edited on May 08, 2008 at 05:15 PM



May 08, 2008 at 05:09 PM
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p.3 #2 · The Swimmer


Geo31 wrote:
I think the shot is quite legit as a sports photo. Just because the photo is not of a competitive event doesn't make is less of a sports photo. If someone took a photo of Lance Armstrong running, I'm sure very few would argue that it didn't belong here. This photo is no less a sports photo because the youngster is not an athlete, more because he's not competing. It's a legit sports photo. Sports photos are staged all the time. Ask Niel Leifer or Walter Iooss.

As such, the C&C given is done so within this context. I think most
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Hey Geo31,

Thanks for taking the time to write that, I think it's fair and balanced. Actually, I already do a few 'sportraits', though I'm not sure this is necessarily the right place to share them

https://www.fredmiranda.com/forum/topic/622948/0#5507660

Regards,

Liam.



May 08, 2008 at 05:49 PM
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p.3 #3 · The Swimmer


Il Medico wrote:
Hi Liam,

I'm not an English major, nor do I know if english is your first language but...

Hi Gene, I know you didn't mean to be funny but I laughed out loud when I read that.

All I can do, as a man born a mile from where Shakespeare performed his plays, is to quote Oscar Wilde, "Two nations separated by a common language".

Kind regards,

Liam.

Edited on May 08, 2008 at 05:55 PM



May 08, 2008 at 05:54 PM
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p.3 #4 · The Swimmer


great portrait shot. nice two-light set up.


May 09, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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p.3 #5 · The Swimmer


rbranan wrote:
great portrait shot. nice two-light set up.


Thanks rbranan, I take it you mean the footballer I linked above and not the swimmer on this thread



May 09, 2008 at 03:29 PM
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