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Archive 2008 · The Alders wait

  
 
Tim ONeill
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p.1 #1 · The Alders wait


I have been looking for this comp in color. Since it is a latent winter scene, I grabbed this in IR. I'd be interested in comments.
http://i.pbase.com/o6/99/15999/1/95430821.poEW7guZ.Alderswaitupload.jpg



Apr 29, 2008 at 11:23 PM
eric kim
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p.1 #2 · The Alders wait


Seems a little cluttered in the middle. Would have preferred if there was more black space in-between more of the trees like the far left and right sides. Regardless, its a nice shot that really makes me feel the chill of the winter in the image.


Apr 29, 2008 at 11:26 PM
Tim ONeill
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p.1 #3 · The Alders wait


Eric
Thanks for the comment. I do agree about the clutter. I'm still looking for that perfect grove. Alders are weeds here.



Apr 30, 2008 at 08:44 AM
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p.1 #4 · The Alders wait


yeah, but maybe more midtone contrast would help separate the trees? not easy to do with so many weeds . . .
regards, tom



Apr 30, 2008 at 08:49 AM
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p.1 #5 · The Alders wait


I agree with Tom, I think some more contrast would add greatly to the image.


Apr 30, 2008 at 08:01 PM
Allen Maestas
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p.1 #6 · The Alders wait


I like it Tim, doesn't really look IR to me though. More contrast might be good, but you could also just selectively dodge the highlights in the trees and then selectively burn the shadows, to help guide the eye.. You could even apply a slight vignetting, but all in all I like it the way it is.

Al



May 02, 2008 at 01:08 PM





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