Nice high-key image. The title is a disconnect with the image; too obscure. If you have to explain it too much then it probably won't register with most folks. Nice shot though, you've obviously got some great photographic and software skills!!! The crop bothers me; I'd probably like to see the guy's head in the frame, too?
This shot has an interesting style, but like others I missed the point as well. I think just a little tweak with one letter visible and in reading orientation on each paper ball would work. Good luck this week.