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https://www.fredmiranda.com/hosting-data//500/129268Raspberries2_1453COMP.jpg


Apr 27, 2008 at 10:55 AM
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These look good enough to eat. Nice shot perfect DOF and great lighting.
Take care
Mark



Apr 27, 2008 at 12:40 PM
Steven Roberts
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This is beautiful. My only comment is I would like to see the berries be a bit more moist. Otherwise, very nice shot.

Steve R



Apr 28, 2008 at 05:40 AM
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p.1 #4 · #292 Fresh


Thanks guys...I'd add some moisture, but my kids have eaten my subject!!


Apr 28, 2008 at 06:52 AM
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Yummm, nice shot, I think a closer crop would of helped, to much empty space on the one side of the photo. Good Luck

Norm



Apr 28, 2008 at 07:54 AM
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Nice clean pic - yep - what I would have done perhaps: centered container with berries. To moist them a bit leave them in water for a couple of minutes. Getting rid of the left darkish line as it is a little distracting from the picture.

If your kids ate the raspberries, take a picture of the empty bowl. Yep, all clean...

Edited on Apr 28, 2008 at 08:36 AM



Apr 28, 2008 at 08:35 AM
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Beautiful; yes, freshly washed berries would have been even better, but it's lovely.


Apr 28, 2008 at 04:04 PM
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p.1 #8 · #292 Fresh


Hi Terri,

Wow. I love the detail in the berries and the color you have captured here. Just terrific. Good luck this week.

Steve S.



Apr 29, 2008 at 09:31 PM
Pete Gebhardt
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I like the composition and the white space on the left. Maybe a few drops would have added a little something. I really love the colors and contrast.


Apr 29, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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p.1 #10 · #292 Fresh


I like this image a lot. Would not like to see it centered as one poster suggested. I think what you've done works really well.

As an aside: In the Current Entries view of all images, depending on how many come before, I often see my all-white plates beside your white background with red berries beside Bev's all-red tail light. I'd love to have all three images framed side-by-side like this on my wall.

-- Rich



Apr 30, 2008 at 09:17 PM
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Terri--Congrats on your finalist status! Best of luck. --Frank


Apr 30, 2008 at 11:56 PM
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Love the texture of the berries.
Very nice entry!
Congrats.



May 01, 2008 at 09:13 AM





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