Strad 
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: On
|
A vastly better photo, Carrol! Where did you find such identical twins to shoot? I think you chose the best shot for the WA although I like some of the other shots very much, too. Unfortunately, the backgrounds are somewhat distracting. In photo C (my favorite of those) it wouldn't be hard to clone up some material from the rest of the photo to get rid of that distracting design over their heads. It's interesting to see that throughout those photos, the twin on the left has a more ebulliat personality than the twin on the right. I guess that's how their parents can tell them apart.  As to the cropping of this one... I don't mind the little bit of crop off their heads so much but if it were my photo, I'd crop in tighter. That's probably where the crop problem lies - either you need to allow all of their heads to show or crop down courageously so that it really focuses on their faces. Right now it looks sort of like you just missed framing their heads in the viewfinder - in other words, a mistake. Easily fixable. Whatever you do - do not center them! I love how the left twin's hand drapes over the shoulder of the right twin. If you do crop in tighter, you can afford to lose some of the background but don't go so far as to lose any of the hand. My two cents... 
All the best,
Endre
|
