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Archive 2008 · Succulent Colors

  
 
kinetic
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p.1 #1 · Succulent Colors


Martha's Courtyard, Old Town San Diego, California

I was down in San Diego taking pictures last weekend, and happened upon the most amazing store. This little place has tons of small little crafts, plants, etc.

While my significant other shopped around for things, I stopped at this array of succulents, slightly positioned my favorite in front of the others, got my 50mm wide open, and took a series of shots at different angles.

Here is my favorite taken vertically. At f/1.8, the DOF was a bit shallow, may have worked better at f/2.



Edited by kinetic on Feb 21, 2008 at 12:58 AM GMT

Edited on Feb 21, 2008 at 03:58 AM



Feb 20, 2008 at 07:19 PM
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p.1 #2 · Succulent Colors


wow verry nice, extremely fantasic composition. GRRReat colors. perfect bokeh for the scene. WOw i luv this pic:P


Feb 20, 2008 at 11:59 PM
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p.1 #3 · Succulent Colors


Love it!

But from my POV, that little white think on the left of the in focus pink vase.. That really distracts my eyes.

Suggest trying to photoshop that out!



Feb 21, 2008 at 03:18 AM
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p.1 #4 · Succulent Colors


white fire. wrote:
Love it!

But from my POV, that little white think on the left of the in focus pink vase.. That really distracts my eyes.

Suggest trying to photoshop that out!


wow good catch, you really looked at the picture! i didn't see the mark, it's great when there are others looking with fresh eyes.



Feb 21, 2008 at 03:41 AM
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p.1 #5 · Succulent Colors


fixed the weird distracting white things in the first post.


Feb 21, 2008 at 03:59 AM
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p.1 #6 · Succulent Colors


Looks way better, but those little rocks are still a little distracting to me..Maybe it's just me, but my eyes are still fading away from loooking at the subject in the picture.


Feb 21, 2008 at 02:46 PM
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p.1 #7 · Succulent Colors


how would you feel (come on... let's talk about feeling now!) about having the 2nd or 3rd row of those little pots in focus to give you some foreground depth? Other than that... it's a very nice pic of a succulent army!


Feb 24, 2008 at 11:54 AM
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p.1 #8 · Succulent Colors


Love the shot. Beautiful colours!


Feb 25, 2008 at 10:11 AM
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p.1 #9 · Succulent Colors


I think f/1.8 was all you needed there - the first pot seems fully inside the DOF and the rest fade quickly. The bokeh could perhaps be a bit nicer - the backgrounds look a bit splotchy - but that's only if I have to say something "critical." I like the shot overall - quite a bit. Good eye.


Feb 25, 2008 at 04:18 PM





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