I too find the feet distracting, although I like the concept and creativity. However, your shooting angle combined with the loosely draped clothing and her bent knees make her look about 3' tall. Also, does she have something between her teeth?
For the most part, I like it. I don't necessarily find the feet distracting, but maybe a shot without the feet, ie have her swing her legs closer to you a smidge and then lie fer feet flat on the ground and shoot just the upper body. In general, I like that pose better.
Also, not sure how other feel about it, but the tilted head is what really throws me for a loop. Have her straighten her head out and keep her face towards the camera. Maybe have her cover the potentially exposed cleavage too... Hope that helps!
I am a complete newbie here but the way her gown falls there is a good amount of skin showing below the neck. I don't know if that can processed out or not but it adds a likely unwanted element there.
