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Archive 2008 · Waterfall for C&C

  
 
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p.1 #1 · Waterfall for C&C


This is my first post in a while. I would appreciate input on this image of Gordale Scar that I made this weekend. In particular, comments on composition and my post-processing would be helpful. It was shot with a 30D and 10-22mm lens at 13mm. The exposure is F11 at 1/3 sec.
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Jeff
http://jgrasty.zenfolio.com/img/v3/p13034825-4.jpg




Jan 21, 2008 at 05:28 PM
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p.1 #2 · Waterfall for C&C


Color wise it looks a little warmer than the area itself ( ) and perhaps does not really capture the scale of the place either.




Jan 22, 2008 at 02:10 AM
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p.1 #3 · Waterfall for C&C


The rocks cut through at the bottom distract me. It looks like it needs work in highlights and curves to make it a bit darker with more details.

The framing seems pinched and it is hard to get the perspective (is it a small stream close or a big river). As if I am looking at too little of the picture. I think either tighter or further back would improve.

I think this picture would look better framed portrait showing the full height.




Jan 26, 2008 at 03:08 PM





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