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Archive 2007 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?

  
 
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p.2 #1 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?


Look slike to much post-processing to me, or someone set your camera on VGA mode... I'd keep them just because they're good for "this is what happens when you ____". She's a keeper, though.


Dec 20, 2007 at 06:02 PM
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p.2 #2 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?


Your original shots of Lauren that you did at the time were 100% better processed. They look as you have copied them off glossy prints. Sorry Jay, back to the tutorials.

Mike



Dec 20, 2007 at 07:29 PM
Nick Klofkorn
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p.2 #3 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?


there's some serious artifacting going on here


Dec 21, 2007 at 12:25 AM
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p.2 #4 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?


Seems to me your post processing needs attention...these are very, very noisy and quite drab on my monitor...I suspect there were too many pixels thrown away somewhere along the PP trail. The girlfriend, is terrific...




Dec 26, 2007 at 07:25 PM
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p.2 #5 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?


A pretty girl, but #2 shows that she's really starting to pack on the pounds. I know that the majority of women are big-legged girls, but is that what you want you show in your model? #3 is a better composition even if it is out of focus.


Jan 02, 2008 at 01:54 PM
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p.2 #6 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?


egarrard,

This is such a hysterical comment from you. Lauren, starting to pack on the pounds?

Oh please! She is in excellent shape and has no weight problems, whatsoever. I just had to respond to your post.




Jan 09, 2008 at 10:59 AM
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p.2 #7 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?


framing is reasonable. DOF is good.
but these pictures are so damn noisy it hurts.



Jan 09, 2008 at 11:27 AM
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p.2 #8 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?


This is such a hysterical comment from you. Lauren, starting to pack on the pounds?
Oh please! She is in excellent shape and has no weight problems, whatsoever. I just had to respond to your post.


Can I second that?

Furthermore, to me this forum is where you comment on the techniques, not on the shape of the models...



Jan 09, 2008 at 05:48 PM
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p.2 #9 · Lauren - Are these worth keeping?


Tim,

Guilty as charged. I don't know what the heck happened with my PP skills on these shots, but the noise is horrible.

Never again!

Thanks for the feedback, jeroenn.




Jan 09, 2008 at 09:56 PM
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