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Steve Spencer
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p.1 #1 · #271: Seductive Swan


Saw a pair of swans in the river by my house. This guy at one point was showing off for his mate.

http://www.arts.uwaterloo.ca/~sspencer/pictures/swan_sm3.jpg

Comments and critiques are very much appreciated.

Edited by Steve Spencer on Nov 03, 2007 at 04:06 PM GMT

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Nov 03, 2007 at 11:59 AM
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p.1 #2 · #271: Seductive Swan


I like the shot, but if it were mine I would brighten it up a bit.


Nov 03, 2007 at 01:32 PM
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p.1 #3 · #271: Seductive Swan


Hi Steve,

Nice thought! To most its just a bird flapping wings, but to its mate, its sight of beauty and that attraction proliferates continuation of the species.

I agree with Ryan, its a little too dark for me as well.
Bob



Nov 03, 2007 at 04:01 PM
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p.1 #4 · #271: Seductive Swan


Hi Ryan and Bob,

Thanks for your kind words and your advice about the shot. I have brightened it a bit and re-posted. I think brightening it did help. Thanks again.



Nov 03, 2007 at 04:08 PM
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p.1 #5 · #271: Seductive Swan


Steve, nice subject and great action capture. If this is the brightened image then I'd encourage you to take to to another level and get your whites whiter & brighter on this (in PS, using levels, set your white point with the white eye dropper tool, and the black one for your black). You'll gain wonderful contrast and this will really pop. I'd prefer a different crop personally; he looks a little tightly boxed in here. Good luck!!


Nov 03, 2007 at 04:31 PM
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p.1 #6 · #271: Seductive Swan


Hi Bev,

Thanks a ton for the pointers in PS. I didn't know that trick with levels. I also pulled the crop back a bit. Both I think improved it a bunch. I really appreciate the help that people give in this forum and that you in particular are always so positive and helpful.



Nov 03, 2007 at 05:26 PM
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p.1 #7 · #271: Seductive Swan


Hi Steve
You may know this one already but in levels if you click on the black and white triangles on the histogram as well as holding down the ALT key on your keyboard you will get a shadow and highlights threshhold view. This allows you to identify and chose where clipping occurs.
Take care
Mark



Nov 03, 2007 at 05:55 PM
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p.1 #8 · #271: Seductive Swan


Beautiful picture Steve.
Didn’t see the previous versions but whatever adjustments you did worked beautifully.
She really knows how to make herself look very attractive!




Nov 03, 2007 at 06:51 PM
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p.1 #9 · #271: Seductive Swan


Steve Spencer wrote:
Hi Bev,

Thanks a ton for the pointers in PS. I didn't know that trick with levels. I also pulled the crop back a bit. Both I think improved it a bunch. I really appreciate the help that people give in this forum and that you in particular are always so positive and helpful.



You're so welcome! You did a fabulous job on the corrections. Really looks good now.
This URL has some great info, including the info about levels and using the eyedropper tools.
http://www.twistedtreephoto.com/Photoshop%20tutorial/Photoshop%20tutorial1.html



Nov 03, 2007 at 09:12 PM
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p.1 #10 · #271: Seductive Swan


Thanks again for the PS help, Mark and Beverly. In my normal post-processing I use Aperture for RAW conversion, contrast, saturation, highlights, shadows, and levels. Then I use CS3 for cloning, layers, and sharpening. So I haven't used CS3 for levels much at all. You comments were very helpful. Thank you and jban99 for your kind words about the shot as well.

Edited by Steve Spencer on Nov 04, 2007 at 05:18 PM GMT



Nov 03, 2007 at 09:41 PM
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p.1 #11 · #271: Seductive Swan


Great shot Steve,
This guy is really strutting his stuff. It's a beautiful bird. How close were you to it? Are they approachable?
Thanks
-Nick

Edited by nlamendo on Nov 04, 2007 at 08:16 PM GMT (Reason: typo)



Nov 04, 2007 at 10:57 AM
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p.1 #12 · #271: Seductive Swan


Hi Nick,

Thanks for your words of encouragement. I took the shot from a bridge over the river they were swimming in. I don't think they noticed me. I was about 20 to 30 feet away and I used my 70-200mm f/4L IS at 200mm with my 1.6X crop factor this would be a full frame equivalent of about 320mm. My experience with swans is if they notice you they often try to run you off, so it is a lot easier to get off shots if they don't notice you. Thanks again for your comments.



Nov 04, 2007 at 11:19 AM
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p.1 #13 · #271: Seductive Swan


Great catch, perfect timing ! A litteral attempt to be attractive :-)
I'd like to see more space left but it's a great shot.

Cheers,

Julien



Nov 04, 2007 at 05:02 PM
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p.1 #14 · #271: Seductive Swan


Hi Julien,

Thanks for your kind words. I wish I could have left a little more room at the top, but she raised out the water pretty fast, so this was the best I could do to adjust. Thanks again,

Steve



Nov 04, 2007 at 07:39 PM
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p.1 #15 · #271: Seductive Swan


Steve Spencer wrote:
Hi Nick,

Thanks for your words of encouragement. I took the shot from a bridge over the river they were swimming in. I don't think they noticed me. I was about 20 to 30 feet away and I used my 70-200mm f/4L IS at 200mm with my 1.6X crop factor this would be a full frame equivalent of about 320mm. My experience with swans is if they notice you they often try to run you off, so it is a lot easier to get off shots if they don't notice you. Thanks again for your comments.


Thanks for the info Steve, it's good to know for future reference how they react when approached.
-Nick



Nov 04, 2007 at 08:21 PM
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p.1 #16 · #271: Seductive Swan


Steve Spencer wrote:
Hi Nick,

Thanks for your words of encouragement. I took the shot from a bridge over the river they were swimming in. I don't think they noticed me. I was about 20 to 30 feet away and I used my 70-200mm f/4L IS at 200mm with my 1.6X crop factor this would be a full frame equivalent of about 320mm. My experience with swans is if they notice you they often try to run you off, so it is a lot easier to get off shots if they don't notice you. Thanks again for your comments.


Thanks for the info Steve, it's good to know for future reference how they react when approached.
-Nick



Nov 04, 2007 at 08:21 PM
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p.1 #17 · #271: Seductive Swan


Just showing off-----maybe it's trying to get out of that cold Canadian water.
Good luck...Dan.



Nov 04, 2007 at 09:21 PM
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p.1 #18 · #271: Seductive Swan


Hi Dan,

Thanks for your comments. Good luck this week.



Nov 05, 2007 at 08:21 AM
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p.1 #19 · #271: Seductive Swan


Great capture, Steve! You're right about swans....they aren't very friendly, especially when they're in a romantic mood.

You got great tips, and while I didn't see the others, I think you did a super job on this one. Great color and sharpness.




Nov 05, 2007 at 03:50 PM
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p.1 #20 · #271: Seductive Swan


Hi Philly,

Thanks for the kind words. The tips people provided were great. I learned a lot this week.



Nov 05, 2007 at 07:05 PM
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