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Archive 2003 · Sharlene - warning!!

JeffG
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p.1 #1 · Sharlene - warning!!

ok these are s hots of sharlene today in lingerie. the lingerie is rather see-through so please dont click the link if such things offend you.

http://jrg-imaging.com/sharlene/sharlene.htm

comments welcome

Nov 30, 2003 at 09:44 PM

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p.1 #2 · Sharlene - warning!!

Nice job...the background colors and posing work v.well.

Nov 30, 2003 at 10:12 PM

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p.1 #3 · Sharlene - warning!!

this is more pg-13.

http://jrg-imaging.com/sharlene/CRW_0039.jpg

Nov 30, 2003 at 10:51 PM

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p.1 #4 · Sharlene - warning!!

i think some some focus filter would make it look even better....sometimes too sharp....my 2cent

Dec 01, 2003 at 02:17 AM

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p.1 #5 · Sharlene - warning!!

colors are great, model is lovely, I would like to see this with shallower depth of field and bg more out of focus..

good concept, good lighting..

Dec 01, 2003 at 10:41 AM

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p.1 #6 · Sharlene - warning!!

What bothers me about these pictures is Sharlene looks to be about 14 or 15 years old.

Dec 01, 2003 at 10:57 AM

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p.1 #7 · Sharlene - warning!!

she's 21 next month. most asians ladies i shoot look a lot younger than they actually are.

Dec 01, 2003 at 11:22 AM

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p.1 #8 · Sharlene - warning!!

Cool shots Jeff, she looks very comfortable in front of the camera!

The bright colored background on #1 and #3 distracts me a little bit, but I like it nonetheless! Well done!

Daschund

Dec 01, 2003 at 07:22 PM

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p.1 #9 · Sharlene - warning!!

Lovely shots.
Light is nice.
Post work is perfect.

I have to agree with DW here, the red is kind of distracting.
I don't think it would bother me as much if it didn't bleed onto the model.

She looked like she was fun to work with. Looks very comfortable..

nice work.

Kurt

Dec 01, 2003 at 08:23 PM

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p.1 #10 · Sharlene - warning!!

Hi Jeff,

I actually don't mind if she looks 15. I'm 30 but I also look like I'm 15. 15 pounds overweight.

Seriously, you did a great job. The poses are nice and she is very sensual. I agree with Dave about the DOF.

Regards,

Boka

Dec 01, 2003 at 08:38 PM

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p.1 #11 · Sharlene - warning!!

i actually was after color bleed. gives it the whore house feel...

ooo..i shouldnt type such things here!!

she's a good model, considering she's never done it before.

Dec 01, 2003 at 09:53 PM

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p.1 #12 · Sharlene - warning!!

They all look pretty terrific to me. Was the color bleed effect added in PS? Really enjoy assessing your amazing work. The balance in the mirrored shot was perfect. Your feel for color...and composition are exemplary and to me at least, seem unique. To have reached a distinguishable style is indeed a high achievement.

Dec 01, 2003 at 10:44 PM

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p.1 #13 · Sharlene - warning!!

i just turned the softbox enough so the color was feathered onto her face. i could have easily not done it.

i also wanted it to be obvious it was a kitchen hence why i shot at f/10.

thanks for the comments.

Dec 01, 2003 at 11:47 PM

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p.1 #14 · Sharlene - warning!!

A nice, professional job, EXCEPT for the second pose. She looks as if she is balanced on one hand and one foot, because she doesn't have two feet. She looks like she fell and you caught her on the way down. Sorry.
Paul I.

Feb 20, 2004 at 09:42 PM

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p.1 #15 · Sharlene - warning!!

I agree. All the girlie magazines use soft focus to make it more romantic instead of the here-I-am, inspect the merchandize kind of shot.
Paul I.

Feb 20, 2004 at 09:46 PM


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