I think this picture has some real potential, but it appears to be a little underexposed. I think for this theme it might be even a good idea to overexpose the image a little, as it adds clarity to the picture.
Thanks for the advice it did not come out exactly the way I wanted it to but I wasn't shure what to do to get the look I was after. I will give it another go and fool around with exposure to see what I come up with. Thanks again for the advice.