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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Aravis - French Alps


Hi everyone ! I just joined and this is my first post ...

These pictures were shot this winter, near La Clusaz in the french Alps. I hope you enjoy them.

C&C are welcome, thanks.












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David



May 20, 2024 at 12:49 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Aravis - French Alps


Bienvenue! Iím really enjoying the first shot. The more subtle light on the right side of the frame is lovely. Since you asked for c&c I might try pulling back the brightest highlight on the top left side of the mountain to balance it a bit more. Looking forward to more shots.


May 20, 2024 at 11:37 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Aravis - French Alps


Hi Scott, thanks for your welcome and your comments.

scottsoutter wrote:
Bienvenue! Iím really enjoying the first shot. The more subtle light on the right side of the frame is lovely. Since you asked for c&c I might try pulling back the brightest highlight on the top left side of the mountain to balance it a bit more. Looking forward to more shots.


I agree, you're right, I had not seen this area was too highlighted.

Here is a new version, where I corrected a bit the highlights. What do you think ?






And another from the same region






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May 21, 2024 at 02:07 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Aravis - French Alps


Welcome, David, the color in the last is devine. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!
Douglas



May 21, 2024 at 07:00 AM
 


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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Aravis - French Alps


David, I think it brings out the detail much better. The close up of the peak with that great golden light is grand too.


May 21, 2024 at 08:47 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Aravis - French Alps


Welcome, David! You have some great light going on here. I like the atmosphere of the 2nd shot and the layers of snowy ridges, and the 3rd vertical shot is wonderful.


May 21, 2024 at 11:30 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Aravis - French Alps


Welcome to FM, David.

My thoughts were similar to Scott's. The second version is dramatically improved, with more detail in the highlights. Excellent capture and work in post.

Chuck



May 21, 2024 at 11:32 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Aravis - French Alps


Hi and thanks all for your kind comments and advices. It's always very interesting to get constructive feedback to go further and improve.

Here is a last one from these days, just before sunset.








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David



May 22, 2024 at 04:03 AM







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