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A couple of things first.
- number your photos so people providing C&C can easily reference them and others can follow as well.
- make sure what you post contains the EXIF data, what ever process you used stripped it.
C&C: you always want ball, faces and PEAK action. A number of these appear to have been shot while standing up. Make a habit of always shooting from a low perspective, i.e. ON YOUR BUTT. Best to have action coming at you, so find a position 8-10 feet back off the end line when the 18 yard box intersects. There are significantly more keepers generated from this position vs from the sideline. If you are shooting for a team they usually want offense action and celebrations but it's important to spend some time covering personnel in the mid field, defenders & goalie. Pick a certain amount of time of the match to do this and park yourself half way between the top of the box and mid field. Afterwards return to the end line position. The day time shots need to have been at a higher shutter to lower the light. IMO they're over exposed. Not sure about the post processing but some appear a bit over cooked. Looking at the gear, I would put a 1.4tc on the 300 until the low light pushes the ISO to above 6400 and use it as the main rig with the 100-400 or 70-200 as the second rig. Key is to learn when to put down the longer reach rig during the action. In regards to shutter speed, with good light it's a minimum of 1/1600 or higher, with poorly lit fields at night I try to maintain 1/1250 since my gear can handle higher ISOs. There is one field where I'm forced to 1/1000. I make it point with any occasional afternoon match to make sure I've got the shutter high enough to not over expose.
Spend some time reviewing other postings to see what works and why.
#1 crop it tighter, way too much negative space. Not that sharp. Need to see the exif.
#2 past peak action, frame before maybe better?
#3 peak action is the goalie, crop it down, a bit over exposed looking at the goalie jersey.
#4 not that sharp, players on the right and left add nothing, again I wish I could see the exif.
#5 not bad, were you standing up? If so, sit on your butt.
#6 good peak action. Would have definitely been better from a lower angle.
#7 would be better if action was in center or slightly to the left side of the frame.
#8 nope, ball too far away.
#9 the goalie is out of focus (OOF), toss it out
#10 maybe but too much negative space, with more cropping I'd call this a filler to go with a subsequent celebration shot
#11 nope way past peak action
Keep shooting, it does get better! 
Matt
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